Sitting in a
corner, I was looking at the raindrops on the small window of café. It was
September 27th, the time when the rainy weather tells us that
the winter is coming. After a long
day of work, I always prefer to have a cup of coffee at my favorite coffee shop
which is in a bad part of town; consequently, in that place people are attacked
or stolen from by thieves. But the
hospitality of the coffee shop with the beautiful smell of coffee which is
offered made me prefer it more than any café in the town.
I left the café
to take a short walk in the rain before I went to my house. It was a dark night
at 11p.m when stores start to
close. It was a quiet moment except for the sound of rain drops like clapping
hands at graduation. Suddenly, the sound of steps behind me seemed like they
were following me! I went to right, left; however, the steps still followed me.
I looked behind. He was a man as tall as a tree, who wore a black coat, putting
his hand in his pocket. He look as if he was hiding something. He doesn't look
serene. I couldn't recognize him or see his face except his glasses because of
the dark. The road was empty except for a few cars which didn't hide the steps'
sound.
The questions
started to attack my mind. Why would anyone want to follow me? What did he want
from me? Did my husband hire him to watch me? Did he hold a gun or knife? Did
he want to kill me? But why me? I have never tried to hurt anyone. Why does he
want to hurt me? What should I do now? Oh God, protect me.
I took my cell
phone from my purse trying to call my husband. I knew how much he was jealous,
but he still worried about me. "The phone number you called is closed now,
try again later." I completely forgot. He told me he has a work meeting
until 12:30p.m. Let's try with some friends. They were always asking about me.
If I need some help or any advice, I found them around me. Wait a second, they're
all out of town. Oh no, who could help me. Yes, I found someone. Judy, my
neighbor. I know she'll help me. She has never refused me any request. Her
phone rang. Come on Judy answer please. " Hello." Her voice didn't
sound good, but I started to talk. "I'm sorry, I know it's late, but I
need your help …." She interrupted me quickly," I can't. My son hurt
himself when he was playing. I'm in the hospital with him now. Sorry." Her
words threw me completely. I was lost. She was my only hope.
I wished I had called
a taxi before I left the café instead of taking a short walk; however, that
doesn't matter now. I must disappear from his eyes. So I jogged. "Hey mum,
wait," he said. His voice was thunder on my ears. My steps grew faster and
faster. I ran as fast as I could and my heart was beating wildly. Finally, I
entered a narrow alleyway which was a dead end. " I'm done," I said
with interruptive breaths.
The sound of the
rain was strong like bells' sounds telling the world my time of death. He's
coming. He was becoming closer and closer. My feet were frozen. With all the
fear I felt, I couldn't cry; nevertheless, I still had some hope and I grasped
it strongly. "Finally, you stop," he said with an angry voice. "
What do you want from me?" I said carefully. " I don't even know
you." He entered his hand in his pocket. He tried to get something out
then faced it on me. Could it be a weapon?
I couldn't see
anything except some shadows." Why did you run and let me chase you? I
just want to give you this. You forgot your wallet when you left the coffee
shop," he said. My wallet? Now I remember. Yes he's right. When I was paying
my bill at the counter, the old lady fell on the floor; thus, I left my wallet
at the counter to helped her. Then I left the café without a thought about my
wallet.
I realized now
why he was follow me all this time. I had thought badly about him, but he just
wanted to return my wallet to me. This taught me a lesson; I should stop and
face him to know what he wanted instead of run away from him. That would have saved
scared feelings. Lastly, I thanked him for the municipality he had. I never
forgot that night which was so similar to the horror movies I have been seen.
3 comments:
It's very attractive story. By using similes and metaphors, scary scenes are drawn more realistic. And I like the part that the main character came to the dead-end, the climax. The main character's fear became larger by then. I can't help being excited about what will happen next!
Daichi
This story is very exciting!!
Many details were written, so it's easy to imagine setting.
As I read story, I became excited.
And you used some vocabulary that we learned in class! That's good.
I like this story, good job!!
Yuu
What can I say,, perfect, complete,and exiting. I like the setting also the conflict of the story. as soon as i read it i got exited and so curious about the end of the story.
Good luck
Jassim
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